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Accelerated English 10 Class Analysis

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During the course of Mrs Wagner's Accelerated English 10 class I learned a tremendous amount. I learned all about things such as TIQA, ANT, verb tense. I also learned a gamut of vocabulary words. So over the course of the first semester I blossomed as a writer and Mrs Wagner showed me the hidden talents within my brain. One of the first things I learned this semester was TIQA formating, which is how I make all of my paragraphs now. In my prior days I just free-wheeled my essay and had no sort of proper organization causing my essays to look like chaos. In essays I wrote last year and even the first piece we wrote this year I would write without a proper harness and when we did the Book of Sands paragraph I was quite confused. Over time my …show more content…

ANT showed me how to get my reader's attention, then give the necessary information and follow it with my thesis statement. In the beginning of the semester my introductions were boring and probably made my teacher hate her job, but after she taught me the correct way of writing them through ANT I was on my way to writing introductions she could enjoy. I don't wish to repeat my mistakes but I will say that my Tyger vs Tiger introduction looked more like a list than an introduction. Showing how much of a struggle it was to be a bad writer in the beginning of the year. But after a while of practicing the correct way I was able to create a nearly flawless introduction in my Things Fall Apart Essay: “Imagine having no one truly understand you, to always have people only see one stereotypical side of your character. The people of the nineteenth century Europe only saw the Africans in a certain way, they only saw them as uncivilized beasts. The Europeans try to colonize the African Ibo tribe in Achebe's, Things Fall Apart. The Europeans see the Ibo with their own ethnocentric views, as uncivilized animals less than them, simply in need of saving from their barbaric anarchy. Achebe contradicts the stereotypes of Africa being uncivilized by showing that the values, culture, and structure of the Ibo tribe contribute to an advanced society.” This was my favorite introduction of the year because of its …show more content…

As my vocabulary increased so did my writing skills. My word choice in the beginning of the year was very poor and I would use dead words like good, bad, thing, very and other words that had a much better synonym. My vocabulary was not proficient until I was taught over 150 new words and realized that sentences like “I like your soup, it is good” doesn't sound great in the slightest when you can say “I lust for you soup, it surpassed all of my expectation of a full flavor”. My word choice has tremendously changed for the better over this year and it is obvious. Thanks to Mrs Wagner's vocab book that we all hated at first, I have learned how to bring juice into my originally dry essays. Although I learned many wonderful things this past semester, I will finish with verb tense. I never knew until this year that you want to keep a present tense when talking about events that happen in book. In my first draft of my Life Of Pi essay I wrote the whole book in past tense and could have turned in a terrible essay if it weren't for Mrs Hunter editing it. Now I write all my essays on books in the correct tense, making for a much more clean essay, helping the blossoming of my

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