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Unit 2 Assignment 2 Textual Analysis

Satisfactory Essays

As far as organization goes for this piece of writing, I would give Kim a 2 for many different reasons. She does have a title (not shown in picture) and shows logic when putting her sentences together. She also has an awesome hook that keeps me interested but her pacing feels extremely awkward. Kim tends to jump from topic to topic in this paragraph and it feels weird reading it aloud. It is easy to tell what the main point is for this writing piece but she should have reread her writing and organized it

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